Date: 2011-10-26 05:05 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] strawberryshortcake01
Though you did cover most of the VAPID points, your essay was very rushed and it clearly showed that you did not spend much time on it. You could have expanded the second paragraph more with your own thoughts and ideas. But overall, it was a decent essay.
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